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Sep 07, 2015 04:17 |  #1

First results from my second shooting with Natalie.If you want I can show more these days.
Any criticism?

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Sep 07, 2015 10:26 |  #2

one is nice, but why cut her right arm out?
For the tryptic, middle one maybe, the 2 others are a no for me.


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Sep 07, 2015 11:59 |  #3

The sun hitting her face in #1 is distracting. Something about the WB in #1 is off to me. Too green in the highlights and midtones maybe?
The pose in the 3rd or the collage is awkward looking. I'd crop in tighter.


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Sep 07, 2015 12:11 |  #4

I agree the color treatment in #1 is just a bit off, makes her look a bit unhealthy. Of the bottom three I like the middle and right. Not loving the armpit pose in the left one. The blotchy light in #1 also takes away.




  
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Sep 08, 2015 01:28 |  #5

Thanks for the feedback!


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Sep 08, 2015 01:47 |  #6

Tough crowd. I like them. Though, i tend to like shadows and sun spots.



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