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Sep 18, 2015 15:02 |  #1

I've never really done a "just because" shoot before, but I had a friend who wanted some pics done. Here's a few of the results. C&C Please!

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Sep 18, 2015 15:26 |  #2

#1 you cut one feet out the frame. all those stems surrounding the subjects are distracting

#2 I like it

#3 why the jeans jacket?

#4 badly needs some perspective correction. she looks like an alien.

#5 i'd crop it a little bit more tightly. cloning out the trunk would also help.
other thank that it's fine


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Sep 18, 2015 16:36 |  #3

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517 (external link)
#1 you cut one feet out the frame. all those stems surrounding the subjects are distracting

I took the original picture at a super weird angle, and just her toe was cut off. I tried to save it by rotating it back to a more normal area, and cropped in a little tighter so that it looked intentional. I still like the way it turned out, but I agree.

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#2 I like it

Thanks!

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517 (external link)
#3 why the jeans jacket?

It's just what she was using as a prop during this session

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517 (external link)
#4 badly needs some perspective correction. she looks like an alien.

Haha, ya the 14mm definitely has some distortion. I have a profile for the lens which helps the mustache distortion, but doesn't help much for things near the edge of the frame.

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517 (external link)
#5 i'd crop it a little bit more tightly. cloning out the trunk would also help. other thank that it's fine

I'll see what I can do, thanks!




  
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