From a portrait shoot last night

I've never really done a "just because" shoot before, but I had a friend who wanted some pics done. Here's a few of the results. C&C Please!

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#1 you cut one feet out the frame. all those stems surrounding the subjects are distracting

#2 I like it

#3 why the jeans jacket?

#4 badly needs some perspective correction. she looks like an alien.

#5 i'd crop it a little bit more tightly. cloning out the trunk would also help.
other thank that it's fine

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517
#1 you cut one feet out the frame. all those stems surrounding the subjects are distracting

I took the original picture at a super weird angle, and just her toe was cut off. I tried to save it by rotating it back to a more normal area, and cropped in a little tighter so that it looked intentional. I still like the way it turned out, but I agree.

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517
#2 I like it

Thanks!

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517
#3 why the jeans jacket?

It's just what she was using as a prop during this session

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517
#4 badly needs some perspective correction. she looks like an alien.

Haha, ya the 14mm definitely has some distortion. I have a profile for the lens which helps the mustache distortion, but doesn't help much for things near the edge of the frame.

gabrielepierfederici wrote in post #17712517
#5 i'd crop it a little bit more tightly. cloning out the trunk would also help. other thank that it's fine

I'll see what I can do, thanks!