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Sep 23, 2015 13:18 |  #1

I took some pics of my son...

Does he get to lost in the sunflare/ fog?

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Is this too cheesy? He is ALWAYS scaring me with spiders, informed me it was his hobby  :p. I also wish the board line was not right above his head.

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Sep 23, 2015 13:34 |  #2

It's not my thing, but I wouldn't call it cheesy.




  
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They're both OK. Trying to 'fix' them would break them. I explain: in #1, yes he does get a bit hazed, but it's the haze and the flare what make that shot—boosting contrast would make it look jarring. With #2, the line behind him anchors him to the frame—this is reinforced with the vertical line from his tie: neat; now, what is distracting is the line to his right.


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Sep 23, 2015 14:21 |  #4

I agree mostly with Alveric. Both are cute photos.

#1 you could try adjusting contrast or levels and see what you get but you most likely won't be able to do much without making it worse.

#2 Clone out the vertical lines and see how it looks. It would have been better shot from an angle along the wall to add some out of focus wall behind or in front of him.


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Sep 23, 2015 20:03 |  #5

Love the feedback thank you so much!


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Sep 23, 2015 20:17 |  #6

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Sep 23, 2015 20:19 as a reply to  @ Dave3222's post |  #7

I like the board added! I changed the crop to add more boards. Thanks!!


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