2 more from Natalie

...hope you like it
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really nice.

I think the nearly blown out sun spot on her right breast is a big distraction.

I like the first one. At first glance, I thought that blown out area was an OOF object in the foreground.

The second one would be good but, for me, I don't like her mouth. It looks like she is puckering and sticking her lips out.

Her set on your site is pretty good too!

I don't get some of the expressions models use. Who's coaching them? I mean, I see some expressions that just look awkward and are hard to look at at.

Thx for your feedback

Really like these shots, great work !!!

saea501 wrote in post #17727361
I think the nearly blown out sun spot on her right breast is a big distraction.

Huh. I didn't notice it at first. I was to busy looking at her breast. Then her eyes. Then her breast. Then I noticed it.

williamfriggle wrote in post #17730843
Huh. I didn't notice it at first. I was to busy looking at her breast. Then her eyes. Then her breast. Then I noticed it.

Steady, Freddy...........gotta control that 12 year old boy inside.

Thanks guys

Lovely captures and a beautiful model also.

I loooove both photos. Feel, composition, colors ... pretty much everything but one thing.

On second image its a lot more pronounced then on first, but still ... its there too as well.

Under her right eye there is basically one tone with no shadows or any kind of a detail at all ... makes that part of her face 2dimensional. I need shadows ... to make me belive there is a curvature to her face and not flat plane.

Something like this. I apologize for smudges and generaly bad postprocessing, but i just wanted to show what bothers me and it should be even more obvious then i have done it.