Tried new lighting styles - criticism on anything welcomed.

Criticism welcomed:

I like the first one, though a little more light on her hair would be nice.

The second one is not working for me.

Like the lighting on the first one but not the composition...want less of the models back.
Second one could be brighter with a little less dead space.

Aside from that...I've been trying to duplicate "golden hour lighting" in studio.
To that end, I've just ordered these...http://www.amazon.com …ref_=od_aui_det​ailpages00
Gary Fong seems to like this type of accent lighting...https://www.youtube.co​m/watch?v=YtAHve85k4w

chauncey wrote in post #17729916
Like the lighting on the first one but not the composition...want less of the models back.

Thanks for the feedback Chauncey. One of the reasons I composed the shot with this much of her back is she wanted to show off her tattoo. Although I see what you mean and I could have used less; I was just concerned with having it too far off to the bottom corner.

Her hair is disappearing into the background in #1. The top 1/3 of her head is missing.