Ring shot for c&c

Hi everyone I was looking for some c&c on this ring shot I captured from a recent wedding.

Thanks,
Alan

Nice shot,

I personally would like to see a little more magnification on the rings... When I first looked at it, I felt like the grapes are kind of competing as a subject. But I do think the setup is cool

Zoom and/or crop tighter. Its great in every aspect other than size of the rings.

Unfortunately the rings don't seem to be the primary subject.

A different crop might help to emphasize the rings more. Obviously they're the subject, being they're the only thing in sharp focus, but a different position within the frame could help. I would also clone out whatever that pink string looking thing is.

Thank you everyone for the great suggestions I really appreciate it

Hows this one

Better but I would go even tighter.

Not saying first one was bad but second one is better with the tighter crop

I agree to the above two. It looks great but have a second tighter crop image now for variety!

if you are going to do a little photoshop'ing...I'd say balance the right side by cloning the grapes on the left-side. I think, that will put viewers, like me, looking at the center and will not be distracted on the grapes on the left.