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Oct 12, 2015 19:29 | #1

Nikon D750 • Nikon AF-S DX Nikkor 35mm f/1.8G @35mm • 1/50 • f/5 • ISO 250

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Nikon D750 • Nikon AF-S DX Nikkor 35mm f/1.8G @35mm • 1/800 • f/5 • ISO 250

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Nikon D750 • Nikon AF-S Nikkor 24-120mm f/4G ED VR @38mm • 1/1000 • f/5.6 • ISO 250

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Oct 12, 2015 22:58 | #2

I love how you got the sun flair in the first two images.

Lots of interest in #1. The back ground is a touch distracting, though goes well for a dog.

To me #2 is a very strong image. Love it! I wouldn't mind some fill light though. (tough to do with pets)

#3, is fine, but nothing really that strong to keep my attention. I see you were trying to get that outcrop with the wooden thing (gazebo?) to be the foreground. I would say to keep working the area and keep trying different compositions.

#4, though i like the sun flair, i don't think that there is quite a strong enough subject.

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Oct 13, 2015 00:22 | #3

all of them are very nice!

1 might be cropped to put the subject off center a bit more. nice cairn.

2 awesome

3 nice sense of solitude. makes me want to vacation there.

4 excellent exposure. I can see this being used in a commercial setting or ad/magazine thing.

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Oct 13, 2015 08:11 | #4

I really like the first 2 shots of the dog. I'd probably crop a little off the sky in the last 2 shots since there's nothing going on up there, but allows your viewer's eye to wander there.

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Oct 14, 2015 10:25 | #5

I like $#2 a lot.

# 3 looks like it's leaning to the left a bit.

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Oct 14, 2015 11:39 | #6

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#1 woulda been a winner were it not for the fence and the Inukshuk wanna-be. I like #2. Tried #3 in black & white yet?

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Oct 16, 2015 21:14 | #7

Thank you all for your critiques, they are very much appreciated.

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Oct 17, 2015 00:43 | #8

1. Great subject pose and surroundings. I might like it better without the sun flair.

2. I know sun flair is essential to the image, but it's overpowering for me.

3. Excellent composition and subject. The subject texture really pops.

4. Beautiful image, sun flair is perfect.

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Oct 17, 2015 08:07 | #9

#2 is best for me. Love the sun flare and the highlighting on the dog. You also have good level of detail in the shadows.

#3 is next best, like the contrast and strength of colours, like the composition.

#1 like this, but a bit busy.

#4 good PP, but nothing really of interest in the shot. You also have quite a bit of CA on the left hill.

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Oct 17, 2015 08:31 | #10

I really like #2, but am not a fan of any of the other ones.

Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

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