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Nov 02, 2015 19:58 |  #1

From an artistic perspective...are there any options on improving this picture?

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Nov 02, 2015 20:18 |  #2

I like it. From an artistic perspective, in which I feel the distinction between the in focus stamen et al and out of focus petals is important, I suggest that you clean up the stray specks of pollen.


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Nov 03, 2015 05:49 |  #3

What is the pin/blue banding on the left? It looks like an artifact and is distracting.


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Nov 03, 2015 09:01 |  #4

What is the pin/blue banding on the left

Tis merely the way the light/colors are displayed...not an artifact.


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Nov 03, 2015 09:33 |  #5

too centered and those colors on the left are definitely distracting, reminds me of something you might see with an aerial TV antenna back in the day.


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Nov 03, 2015 13:52 |  #6

Point taken...thanks a lot.

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Nov 03, 2015 17:02 as a reply to  @ chauncey's post |  #7

much nicer, IMO.

is there anything to the right in the frame? i really think it would make a difference to get away from a 1:1 crop.


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Nov 03, 2015 17:25 |  #8

Looks great now.


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Nov 03, 2015 17:42 |  #9

wow that's so sharp, awesome!




  
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Nov 15, 2015 17:05 |  #10

Nice. I would print these.


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Nov 15, 2015 18:04 |  #11

Thanks folks...really appreciate the feedback.


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