First of all, really nice job, Ryan! This type of shoot is more challenging than it may at first appear. But they're also a lot of fun!
PhilF wrote in post #17776288
Your key light placement is too high in pic 1.
The highlights are a bit overexposed losing details.
Yeah, maybe just a little overexposed for darker skin. But honestly, I'd prefer to change perhaps the positioning of those lights than their power. Also, I'd probably look to even the left-right lighting in the first photo.
Aressem wrote in post #17776296
No offense taken. Thank you Phil. I appreciate it, as I have plenty to learn. So grids on the kickers (strip boxes) or key light (BD) or both? I have a grid for my Mola but I find that it reallllly focuses the light and probably wouldn't have been ideal for a shoot like this. Correct me if I'm wrong. I definitely need to get grids for the strip banks though as I had a lot of light spill. I had to set up a giant flag on the kicker to camera right as it was causing what I think was lens flare (???) or a "glow" from the right side of the image. I'm still not entirely sure what was going on but it seemed like the one AB1600, camera right, was producing more right than the one on the left. I moved it further away, I changed it's angle, it just continued to seem brighter. Next time I'm going to give myself more time to setup and start metering my lights. If for whatever reason the right kicker WAS producing more light (for whatever reason), I'll likely put the kickers in separate groups, meter, and adjust accordingly. The next thing I need to figure out with PW is power tracking (I think it's called?).
I haven't used a mola. But in general, I grids prevent spill more than actually focusing the light. The grid also cuts down a little bit on your power levels, so you may need to turn up the power by +1/3 or even more, depending upon the grid for that light. The main thing is to control the spill. That can usually be achieved with your grids and finding a good angle for your lights. Another tip to help with your flare issue would be to try a different focal length or even a different lens selection. Going with a 70-200 as you did here is what I would have started with, too. But try out an alternate focal length. You can also buy easily insertable and inexpensive flags for your flashes/kickers.
Again, really good job. I follow a number of photographers who are body-builder specific, and it's always fascinating to see their results.