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Nov 17, 2015 20:07 |  #16

Thanks gonzogolf.

These are gonna get cropped to 1 X 1 for his website anyway. I'm not sure where I stand on horizontal or vertical.


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Nov 17, 2015 20:18 |  #17

I think they turned out well. What was the feedback from them?




  
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Nov 17, 2015 20:19 |  #18

Thanks!

They were very pleased.


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Nov 21, 2015 19:57 |  #19

I edited the images today
These were the three shots that needed the most work.
Opinions are greatly appreciated.
Before, then after.

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Nov 21, 2015 21:26 |  #20

As a dentist, these things have been etched on my brain and I can't avoid "seeing" them. However, they have nothing to do with anything other than the teeth in the shots, so likely you can safely stop reading here and ignore it all.

The older dentist *looks* like has had some trauma to his upper left central incisor at some point in his life as it is discolored compared to his right incisor (and it's also shorter, perhaps it was chipped at the same time). This draws my eye like a magnet. Whenever I see this I always think, How can a dentist recommend something like a veneer to someone who can just look up and say, "But you have a crooked and discolored smile, why should I fix mine?" Even if the coloring is just an artifact of the lighting used here, I would do a digital "whitening" and lengthening on that left central.

Other than that completely off-tangent thought, I really like the shots.


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Nov 21, 2015 21:43 |  #21

Bcaps wrote in post #17792182 (external link)
The older dentist *looks* like has had some trauma to his upper left central incisor at some point in his life as it is discolored compared to his right incisor

It's off center, too. His midline shifts considerably from his nose downward.


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Nov 21, 2015 21:46 |  #22

OhLook wrote in post #17792199 (external link)
It's off center, too. His midline shifts considerably from his nose downward.


Yes, it's off to the right by a couple of millimeters. I didn't mention it as studies have have shown that it can be off by a country mile (~6 mm) before the general public notices it.


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Nov 22, 2015 02:33 |  #23

Bcaps wrote in post #17792182 (external link)
As a dentist, these things have been etched on my brain and I can't avoid "seeing" them. However, they have nothing to do with anything other than the teeth in the shots, so likely you can safely stop reading here and ignore it all.

The older dentist *looks* like has had some trauma to his upper left central incisor at some point in his life as it is discolored compared to his right incisor (and it's also shorter, perhaps it was chipped at the same time). This draws my eye like a magnet. Whenever I see this I always think, How can a dentist recommend something like a veneer to someone who can just look up and say, "But you have a crooked and discolored smile, why should I fix mine?" Even if the coloring is just an artifact of the lighting used here, I would do a digital "whitening" and lengthening on that left central.

Other than that completely off-tangent thought, I really like the shots.

Hot dang, nothing like a fresh set of eyes to pick up on things. Thanks!


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Nov 22, 2015 09:33 |  #24

Thanks to everybody that checked out this thread and to those that opined on the images.
Bcap, awesome input!
Here's my edit on the tooth

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Nov 22, 2015 12:13 |  #25

I think you did a nice job on these. The woman in the last picture has some type of imperfection just above her upper lip that could probably be touched up.


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Nov 22, 2015 14:07 |  #26

Thanks Bob_r


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