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Nov 21, 2015 16:24 |  #1

Probably my best ones yet.

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Nov 21, 2015 16:26 |  #2

#3 and an extra

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Nov 21, 2015 18:23 |  #3

3&4 are nice.... It appears to me that there is too much vignetting in the 1st two.


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Nov 21, 2015 19:14 as a reply to  @ swbkrun's post |  #4

That's my attempt at blending out the background. Here it is again without the vignette and a closer crop.

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Nov 23, 2015 06:25 |  #5

Beautiful hair (I'm a red-head)

#3 has too much flash for my taste
#4 is my favorite even tho not looking at camera.

#1 - my first impression was yuck (sorry)... don't know if it is too much sharpening or something just feels off and the rule of thirds would be your friend. Eyes dead center bugs me

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Nov 23, 2015 06:29 |  #6

Nice shots but too much vignetting for me. Its just too obvious for me. The one that you re-posted is better.


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Nov 23, 2015 08:09 |  #7

BTW the images look different from how I view them on my computer vs on my smartphone, which is frustrating. For example, on my computer the vignette appeared more suble and the skin tone in #1 was better. So I take it is shouldn't rely on my computer.


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Nov 23, 2015 08:13 |  #8

atsilverstein wrote in post #17793806 (external link)
BTW the images look different from how I view them on my computer vs on my smartphone, which is frustrating. For example, on my computer the vignette appeared more suble and the skin tone in #1 was better. So I take it is shouldn't rely on my computer.

You should probably try to calibrate your computer. That said if you can't rely on your computer what would you rely on? Also keep in mind that a reverse vignette is a cheesy effect that rarely works.




  
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Nov 23, 2015 08:57 as a reply to  @ gonzogolf's post |  #9

Thanks, I'll look into that.


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