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Nov 22, 2015 19:55 |  #1

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Nov 23, 2015 05:42 |  #3

1 - her pants are to casual and wrinkled, else it looks good.
2 - framed to tight for the focal length, makes for to much perspective distortion.
3 - all the dead space adds nothing to the portrait.
2 & 3 - need fill light, the faces are to cool. Maybe try warng your WB and see if it doesn't adversely effect the background, elae try the selective adjustment brush if using LR or ACR.

She's very photogenic.


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Nov 23, 2015 06:36 |  #4

The first one looks like you'd missed the focus a little but maybe it's just down to the image resizing. I completely disagree with the above comment about the trousers. There is nothing distracting about them at all.

The third photo is really nice, I like her smile and I'm OK with the 'dead' space.

I think all 3 photos could do with a bit of punch in the processing. They all look a little flat to me but maybe that's your style.


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Nov 23, 2015 07:36 |  #5

#1 - Tighter crop and might have slightly missed focus. Outfit looks fine to me. The wrinkles on the pants don't look like wrinkles you could iron out. They look like they are just bunched up bc she is wearing them.

#2 - Just looks like a random photo. Not a senior photo.

#3 - Love it. I love photos with negative space. Ads a lot to it for me. I would just crop out more of the ground.


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Nov 23, 2015 08:09 |  #6

BlackBull wrote in post #17793724 (external link)
I think all 3 photos could do with a bit of punch in the processing. They all look a little flat to me but maybe that's your style.

I agree.

That shirt is messing with my mind though, it's like it wants to be plaid...then it just stops...then it starts again...




  
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Nov 23, 2015 08:11 |  #7

agrandexpression wrote in post #17793805 (external link)
That shirt is messing with my mind though, it's like it wants to be plaid...then it just stops...then it starts again...

Kids these days with there new fandangled clothes! SMH!  :p


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Nov 23, 2015 12:39 |  #8

windpig wrote in post #17793685 (external link)
1 - her pants are to casual and wrinkled, else it looks good.....

BlackBull wrote in post #17793724 (external link)
The first one looks like you'd missed the focus a little but maybe it's just down to the image resizing. I completely disagree with the above comment about the trousers. There is nothing distracting about them at all.

BlakeC wrote in post #17793766 (external link)
#2 - Just looks like a random photo. Not a senior photo.


Thank you for your input. Much appreciated!

agrandexpression wrote in post #17793805 (external link)
That shirt is messing with my mind though, it's like it wants to be plaid...then it just stops...then it starts again...

BlakeC wrote in post #17793807 (external link)
Kids these days with there new fandangled clothes! SMH!  :p


Damn you, I didn't notice that until now... XD


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