Siren Dress - Results from my first fashion lighting workshop

I went to an excellent lighting workshop taught by Leon Saperstein at Studio-FAB in Oakland, CA last night, and thses are a couple of shots I took. I'm brand new to shooting fashion, and I learned quite a bit at this workshop and review. Helpful suggestions about photography or PP are welcome, but I'm posting these primarily to share, not for C&C. Please refrain from making any comments about the model's appearance, she kindly volunteered to be the muse for this lighting workshop, but this was not a model shoot and she is not an agency model expecting to be critiqued, thanks!

IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/BscC​Vk

IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/B14p​5G

I usually don't recommend women be shot with shoulders "square" to the camera as in #2, however #2 is a beauty!
BTW - Model is lovely.

Really nice pictures, especially #1.

I like #2

I like the soft skin. Looks good not overly done looks just right.

What Biffy said.