Light painting with wire wool

Hiya,

I have been doing some light painting with wire wool with a few people in my area. I decided to take photos rather than swing flaming wire wool over my head.

Here are two of my photos that I took.

This is my favourite one

naddieuk wrote in post #17804258
Hiya,

The first was taken on my EOS 350D and the nifty fifty, while the second was taken on my Powershot S95. I have more on my Flickr page.

I would like some C&C. Thank you for looking.

hi. well, since you asked.... my c/c isn't about your technique, though i suppose the pics could use some more crispness, or the opposite with more angle and motion. however, my main comment is that i would like to see a purpose. i realize it's fun to capture, but as a photo i don't see the art. it would be great if you can find a way to work the steel wool stuff into an artistic image.

costumes? a cool "movie" set? a fight between martial artists? that sort of thing.