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Dec 02, 2015 18:11 |  #1

Hi guys. I don't normally do portraits mainly due to not having a suitable lens for it yet, but I did manage to get a few decent shots of my pops today just messing around.

My question is: I tried following the "rules" of composition but honestly, including his entire body in the shot just looked weird and his feet were slightly out of focus; something I wasn't able to get rid of no matter what settings I used. Can someone maybe give me some advice composition-wise? Would really like to get these techniques down for when I get a nifty fifty.

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Dec 02, 2015 19:04 |  #2

Just my 2 cents, and I'm not a pro: Use a prop; have him leaning against a fence post, or a tree, or something. Even in a doorway, kind of leaning against one side or the other. Try not to have him smack dead in the middle of the image.

But you know, I don't really mind that closer-up shot.


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Dec 06, 2015 10:31 |  #3

Firstly, you were 1/30th, f/4 and iso125, so no wonder they are a bit oof - probably camera shake. Liking the second shot best, he looks more relaxed. But to get more than a snapshot, you need to think of the lighting, light direction etc and then choose a background that can drop out of focus. Its all too busy here. I agree with Moose. Find a spot or think about what activity he likes doing - carpentry, fishing etc. If there is something that illustrates his character, that will help. Try and get the eyes on a 'third', that usually works, but I wouldn't over-think the composition. Its more about the lighting.


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Dec 06, 2015 21:57 |  #4

I do this full time and have for almost 3 decades and I agree with all of the following great photographers.

"When subject matter is forced to fit into preconceived patterns, there can be no freshness of vision. Following rules of composition can only lead to a tedious repetition of pictorial cliches." - Edward Weston

"There are no rules and regulations for perfect composition. If there were we would be able to put all the information into a computer and would come out with a masterpiece. We know that's impossible. You have to compose by the seat of your pants." - Arnold Newman

"There are no rules for good photographs, there are only good photographs." - Ansel Adams

"And in not learning the rules, I was free. I always say, you're either defined by the medium or you redefine the medium in terms of your needs." - Duane Michals

"And if you can find out something about the laws of your own growth and vision as well as those of photography you may be able to relate the two, create an object that has a life of its own, which transcends craftsmanship. That is a long road, and because it must be your own road nobody can teach it to you or find it for you. There are no shortcuts, no rules." - Paul Strand

"Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried!" - Bill Brandt

"I came from the outside, the rules of photography didn't interest me... "-William Klein

"...... a photograph can look any way. Or, there's no way a photograph has to look (beyond being an illusion of a literal description). Or, there are no external or abstract or preconceived rules of design that can apply to still photographs. " Garry Winogrand

and maybe my favorite
"......so called “composition” becomes a personal thing, to be developed along with technique, as a personal way of seeing." - Edward Weston




  
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Dec 10, 2015 11:45 |  #5

Thank you so much for the answers. Definitely good info.




  
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