Thoughts and input on these two shots? Does the black & white feel ok for exposure?
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Dec 02, 2015 19:11 | #1 Thoughts and input on these two shots? Does the black & white feel ok for exposure? Image hosted by forum (762354) © jlstan [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Image hosted by forum (762355) © jlstan [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.
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rrblint Listen! .... do you smell something? More info | Dec 02, 2015 22:18 | #2 These are lovely. Exposure looks good to me on #2. Just a touch too hot on the right side of her face on the B&W shot, but I like it that way; it works for the photo. I wouldn't change a thing. Mark
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DThriller Goldmember More info | Dec 03, 2015 13:11 | #3 Be on the lookout for catch lights. The first one you only have it in one eye. http://www.facebook.com/DPhillipsStudios
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There is a catch light in the left eye its just deep in shadow and located more so on the white of the eye.
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Dec 04, 2015 16:14 | #5 I really like the 2nd photo. Nice work! I'm still a noobie. What is a catch light and rim light? I'd really like to recreate this look.
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windpig Chopped liver More info | Dec 04, 2015 16:38 | #6 bsiegler wrote in post #17807385 I really like the 2nd photo. Nice work! I'm still a noobie. What is a catch light and rim light? I'd really like to recreate this look. Catch light is the reflection of the key light in the eye. Would you like to buy a vowel?
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Dec 04, 2015 18:18 | #7 windpig wrote in post #17807413 Catch light is the reflection of the key light in the eye. Rim light is light that is coming from behind the subject illuminating the edge of the subject.
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Catch lights are good. They add life to an image
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stsva Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 04, 2015 19:07 | #9 They're really sweet shots and the CC is pretty mild. I would have liked a little bit of fill on the left side of her face in the first shot, mainly to bring out that eye. Some Canon stuff and a little bit of Yongnuo.
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I was glad I got the shots I did. She was quite active. Thanks for the CC
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s1a1om Senior Member More info | Dec 04, 2015 19:19 | #11 Like everyone else here I think these are decent photos. However, like the others I would concur that the left side of her face is too dark. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
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windpig Chopped liver More info Post edited over 7 years ago by windpig. | Dec 04, 2015 19:59 | #12 bsiegler wrote in post #17807496 Thanks for explaining. So do we want to see the catch light in the eyes or is that bad? You can see a catch light in each of the pupils in the second image (nice portrait of cute little girl, btw). In the first image the nose is blocking the catch light that should be in her left eye. Would you like to buy a vowel?
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PhilF Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Dec 20, 2015 15:16 | #13 I think you should try "feathering" the light . http://philfernandezphotography.com
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