There is no right or wrong; the composition either speaks to you, or it does not. From my viewfinder, it is simply an "interruption" or distraction from enlightenment...
I really, really like that image, Jason!
I love it form an artistic and compositional standpoint. I just don't understand what the word "interruption" has to do with it. I am not really seeing anything that has to do with enlightenment, or that could even be interpreted as enlightenment. Nor do I see anything in the image that is a distraction. What I do see is a beautifully rendered arc that tapers to almost a point.
Perhaps this is one of those abstracts that might be most effective if it were left untitled.
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