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Mar 11, 2016 21:28 |  #1

Trying to avoid snapshot type photos... Thoughts here? Crop above head? What else?

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Mar 11, 2016 21:49 |  #2
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I wouldn't crop it. What I'd do is rotate it a bit so that the vertical lines in the frame are, well, vertical (this will crop the image, though; I'd make sure the crop doesn't give the dog a nail clipping), and apply a vignette so that the emphasis is on the dog, because as it is now, all the bright areas are mighty distracting.


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Mar 12, 2016 00:09 |  #3

Better???

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Mar 12, 2016 03:23 |  #4

crop top a bit more - tail in frame would be good and still not vertical :)


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Mar 12, 2016 07:46 |  #5

Good shot, but crop more off the top & don't crop off the feet & tail.


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Hmm, now the verticals point towards the left. :oops:


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Mar 12, 2016 14:40 |  #7

I find the horizontal lines tend to stand out more than pure vertical lines, so maybe drag a line-level across the drawer face and see how that looks?


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Mar 12, 2016 21:28 |  #8

If too hard to adjust, take the shot again. It's not like its a wedding shot. Great looking dog by the way.


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