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Mar 29, 2016 07:31 |  #1

A friends puppy, my wife at the zoo, a random boat entrance, and my soon playing in the yard.

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Mar 29, 2016 08:13 |  #2

Your pics did not upload right.


The lighting looks good imo in 1-2 & 4.

1. I am assuming this is your wife breast feeding, I would have liked to see her whole body so you can get the feeling of her looking down at her baby/bonding. Right now it is a little odd as you really can't tell what is going on in the picture.

2. nice lighting & DOF. Picture itself does not interest me.

3. Your son is a little QT. Dog in the pic is way to distracting and harsh sun/shadow on face

4. Can you ever go wrong with a cute puppy :)


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Mar 29, 2016 08:35 |  #3

thanks. I like when people are honest and tell me "hey, those aren't that good" and not just "good pic"

Here is the original feeding pic.


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Mar 29, 2016 09:19 |  #4

DanFrank wrote in post #17953138 (external link)
thanks. I like when people are honest and tell me "hey, those aren't that good" and not just "good pic"

Here is the original feeding pic.


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This tells more of a story. I think it is a nice keep sake picture for your family.


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Mar 29, 2016 16:11 |  #5

DanFrank wrote in post #17953138 (external link)
thanks. I like when people are honest and tell me "hey, those aren't that good" and not just "good pic"

Here is the original feeding pic.


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I like this much better, however I can see why you cropped out the stroller. maybe if it was positioned better or if there wasn't garbage in it ;)

Or if it wasn't there at all. Perhaps convert this into a portrait orientation?


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Mar 29, 2016 18:53 |  #6

IMHO, the stroller tells the story of a disheveled mom taking a breather...like it.

Wait one minute...is that a baby bag draped over her neck?


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Mar 29, 2016 19:06 |  #7

chauncey wrote in post #17953882 (external link)
IMHO, the stroller tells the story of a disheveled mom taking a breather...like it.

Wait one minute...is that a baby bag draped over her neck?


Good point. And I don't think that's a bag. It's one of those baby slings that you can breast feed your baby in public with. Very popular nowadays.


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Mar 29, 2016 19:46 |  #8

chauncey wrote in post #17953882 (external link)
IMHO, the stroller tells the story of a disheveled mom taking a breather...like it.

Wait one minute...is that a baby bag draped over her neck?

the baby bag around her neck comment made me laugh out loud!!! Like JMG703 it is a breast feeding cover.


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