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Mar 30, 2016 11:22 |  #1

One of my first propper selfies, hope you like, Feedback always welcome :-)

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Mar 30, 2016 11:27 |  #2

urbanfreestyle wrote in post #17954709 (external link)
One of my first propper selfies, hope you like, Feedback always welcome :-)

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I like the direction you are going with it. The post processing on your face is too soft. I would bump up the clarity and sharpness on it to better match the style of your logo


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Mar 30, 2016 11:28 as a reply to  @ BlakeC's post |  #3

so make it a bit crisper? i did drop the slider to the left when i was running my post.


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Mar 30, 2016 11:29 |  #4

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so make it a bit crisper? i did drop the slider to the left when i was running my post.

yea...experiment with it


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Mar 30, 2016 13:04 |  #5

The iris of your right eye falls into the darkness on that side leaving the impression that you are missing an eye. Either brighten it up some or reshoot and look more to your left.


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Mar 31, 2016 00:57 |  #6

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The iris of your right eye falls into the darkness on that side leaving the impression that you are missing an eye. Either brighten it up some or reshoot and look more to your left.

I never noticed that, now i can see it..... it's freaking me out haha!!!!


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Mar 31, 2016 11:12 |  #7

See if you can get a little more light on you while still maintaining the darkness of the background. I need to get another shot like that of myself with a better shirt than the one in my profile.


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Mar 31, 2016 11:14 as a reply to  @ sirquack's post |  #8

yeah, this was using my flashlight with a diffueser, so plenty of more scope for getting a better shot.


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