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Apr 04, 2016 17:17 |  #1

Haven't done much of this before... What the heck do I work on...

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Apr 04, 2016 21:25 |  #2

That's gorgeous. The only thing I can think of to improve the image would be to pull some color out of the Milky Way, It's full of color. Unfortunately I have no idea how to do it.-?


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Apr 04, 2016 23:56 |  #3

rrblint wrote in post #17961049 (external link)
That's gorgeous. The only thing I can think of to improve the image would be to pull some color out of the Milky Way, It's full of color. Unfortunately I have no idea how to do it.-?

Ha! You and me both. Thanks


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Apr 04, 2016 23:59 |  #4

Try to limit your exposure to 20 seconds or less... it will be even sharper. Nice shot!


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Apr 05, 2016 07:18 |  #5

Great picture.

You can pull color from any local area with the saturation brush. Set it low and run it over the area you want lift the color from.


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Apr 06, 2016 17:27 |  #6

Cool. I love the image.

Doesn't Nikon make a camera specifically for getting colors out of the night sky? Isn't it the D810A?


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Apr 06, 2016 17:42 |  #7

atsilverstein wrote in post #17963086 (external link)
Cool. I love the image.

Doesn't Nikon make a camera specifically for getting colors out of the night sky? Isn't it the D810A?


yup thats the one, Canon has the 60da also.




  
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May 08, 2016 23:15 |  #8

Looks awesome to me. The only thing that would be better is if there were no tracks directly in front. There are 2 potential solutions - 1. if they are yours, then anticipating the direction of your shot and approaching from the other direction (also good to think about in sand dunes), 2. use PS to clone them out.

OTOH I can see how some folks might prefer the shot with the trail in it.


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May 13, 2016 20:07 as a reply to  @ ejenner's post |  #9

This is probably more of a personal preference, but when I do this type of image I like to cool down the sky...

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May 13, 2016 23:17 |  #10

saea501 wrote in post #17961398 (external link)
Great picture.

You can pull color from any local area with the saturation brush. Set it low and run it over the area you want lift the color from.

Or my favorite to modify just parts of an image are Adjustment Layers for local changes to color & density. (external link)


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May 14, 2016 01:32 |  #11

I took a shot at it too.

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May 14, 2016 19:14 |  #12

Personally, I'd like to see a bit more of the sky and a little less of the snow. I think making the composition a bit less balanced creates something a bit more unique.


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May 17, 2016 00:14 |  #13

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Did you try the same at 15 and 20 seconds?




  
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May 27, 2016 20:51 as a reply to  @ atsilverstein's post |  #14

They have a canon 20da and 70da that is kitted out for astro stuff.

20DA sounds like a cop show to me


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May 27, 2016 21:16 |  #15

i think starting with white balance is the first thing to do.

Like the NFL, i don't post edits "without express written permission" :D so if you want to see a quick edit, let me know.


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