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Apr 06, 2016 19:48 |  #1

fun in the desert bloom, Mesa AZ

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Apr 07, 2016 18:22 |  #2

I like it overall, beautiful colors.

The right foot seems awkward, as if it is about to roll over. Surprised it wasn't aimed downwards, simply more supportive and comfortable? Just wondering.

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Apr 08, 2016 06:55 |  #3

Did you use bare flash to light your model? The lighting seems a little harsh and about a stop too powerful, particularly in the last shot.


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Apr 09, 2016 01:01 |  #4

Nice set! Are pictures #1 and #2 the same but cropped in tighter? On my phone it looks like you photoshopped the subject in hehe




  
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Apr 09, 2016 14:50 |  #5

I think these are almost there, for me the leg placement looks awkward and not really flattering (like she's about to fall off the rock). Some of it is just natural physiology for her but the pose exaggerates it. Second, I would like to see a rim light.


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Apr 11, 2016 22:02 |  #6

nice location, I better get out and enjoy what we got from the rain while i can before it gets too hot.


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Apr 11, 2016 23:47 |  #7

Nice concept but it would be nice to see more of the model. I agree also that her right leg looks a little odd having that bow in it.


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