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Jun 26, 2016 11:14 |  #1

Took this as the sun was just coming up this morning. Feedback appreciated.

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Jun 27, 2016 00:32 |  #2

Colour and atmosphere are nice. I'm not sure that the building adds anything to the image. It also looks a little crooked to my eye.


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Jun 29, 2016 19:20 |  #3

Nice capture, I agree with dodgyexposure. If the building were more like a barn or rustic structure it would be more appealing. Looks too modern, kind of breaks up the mood.


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Jun 29, 2016 23:06 |  #4

I really like the colors, atmosphere and your processing. I think the barn would work better if it wasn't obstructed by the hill and you had zoomed in a bit more.




  
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Jul 04, 2016 11:25 |  #5

I don't mind the building being modern, but I think this is a great shot for blending two exposures. The one you have is perfect for everything but the building. It's flat. I would have stuck around and grabbed a shot right as the sun kisses the building and then blended that in so the building has the depth of the landscape. Hindsight.
And it does feel a little crooked.


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