I just wanted to get some feedback on this.. it's a little more stylized than how I normally edit. Thanks.
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Jul 21, 2016 22:29 | #1 I just wanted to get some feedback on this.. it's a little more stylized than how I normally edit. Thanks. Image hosted by forum (804482) © atsilverstein [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll. I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.
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Jul 21, 2016 23:09 | #2 I like it for what it is, a great casual candid shot. The bokeh in the top right corner is a little strange, but that obviously isn't in your control. I'm guessing you lifted the black levels in the Tone Curve ...I tend do that occasionally as well to get that slight washed-out, "yester-year" effect. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. In this case, I like it. With the impending forum closure, please consider joining the unofficial adjunct to the POTN forum, The POTN Forum Facebook Group
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JonKline Member More info | Jul 21, 2016 23:31 | #3 I like it! To my eye, the skintones are a touch yellow, but my monitor isn't as accurate as I'd like. Cinematographer Chicago
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rrblint Listen! .... do you smell something? More info | Jul 21, 2016 23:31 | #4 The boys arms look very strange. Mark
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MartinDixon Slit-scan project master More info | Jul 22, 2016 04:52 | #5 A good shot in difficult light. flickr
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Jul 22, 2016 05:25 | #6 rrblint wrote in post #18074086 The boys arms look very strange. It's hyper-flexed from leaning on it.. most people's arms do this. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll. I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.
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Jul 22, 2016 05:47 | #7 Martin Dixon wrote in post #18074214 A good shot in difficult light. Running in with a reflector would have helped, but then the moment would have been lost. The Bokeh is a bit odd. There's a chain link fence back there, and it looks like the light is reflecting off of it.. maybe that's what you're referring to. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll. I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.
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Jul 22, 2016 07:32 | #8 Hindsight being what it is...ya might have chosen a better place in the yard. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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Jul 22, 2016 07:36 | #9 chauncey wrote in post #18074290 Hindsight being what it is...ya might have chosen a better place in the yard.
It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll. I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.
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Jul 22, 2016 10:22 | #10 Aah...nine thru the years... The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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CapnJack Cream of the Crop More info | Jul 22, 2016 18:23 | #11 Very nice. The boy's arm looks bent funny at the elbow, but it is a candid as you noted. It is what it is.
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Calm down....Sometimes I feel that some people put their photos in critique corner and only expects positive reactions. People around are here to help you, please don´t ask them for pure compliments, be happy that people with trained eyes are giving you constructive critique for free. Website (online) : www.lukaskrasa.com
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Jul 25, 2016 12:57 | #13 There's a reason why this is called a candid and not a formal shoot. You are a stellar photographer...there is no reason not to take a stellar candid. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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Aug 03, 2016 10:58 | #14 It's a nice candid. The boy's arm easily straightens out using Liquify in Photoshop. You might also work to fill the blown out leg with just a little skin tone and darken the weird bokeh in the u/rt. -- Image Editing OK --
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