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Mar 11, 2006 12:34 | #1

All empty now
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Mar 11, 2006 12:47 | #2

Please allow me 3 quick comments:

First off, on whole, I like it. Nice composition on color and form. Expect someone to say "It's out of focus.", but I see that as the point.

1) I think that both of the orange areas detract from the overall composition. The one hiding behind the glass (with the gray area) is by far the most distracting.

2) I especially don't care for the white area on the left. Again, it detracts from the composition.

3) I am not sure if it was the table you had them set on, or distortion from the lens, or the angle you shot, or a combination, BUT, it looks like the glass is at slightly different angle from the bottle.

Other than those 3 nit-picks it is a nice shot.

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Mar 11, 2006 12:48 | #3

Pic #2

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Mar 11, 2006 14:50 as a reply to @ AV Mode's post | #4

Thanks Rad for comments,

Peiling off the label would have made a better picture.

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Mar 11, 2006 14:53 | #5

Pick number 2 is great!

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Mar 11, 2006 15:10 as a reply to @ md_129's post | #6

Last one, of same topic.

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Mar 12, 2006 02:23 | #7

i like no. 2 and the 3rd is good as well..

the first im just not sure where i want to look

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