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Aug 20, 2016 20:56 |  #1

...because I've posted enough girls already /for a time being/

a portrait of one crazy and smart latvian bard. came to say "hi" at one of his gigs about a month ago and yesterday visited his place for a shoot.

pop-sy image, I suppose. cliches, cliches... :D

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Aug 21, 2016 17:21 |  #2

Something unbalanced with one big arm and one tiny one.


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Sep 06, 2016 22:45 |  #3

I don't think you can ever post enough pictures of girls, even for the time being. In this guy shot, I'd crop out his right arm altogether - about 1/6 off the bottom.


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Sep 06, 2016 23:35 |  #4

osh_sekta wrote in post #18101268 (external link)
...because I've posted enough girls already /for a time being/

a portrait of one crazy and smart latvian bard. came to say "hi" at one of his gigs about a month ago and yesterday visited his place for a shoot.

pop-sy image, I suppose. cliches, cliches... :D


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I'd have to agree with you on that one. Well executed, though. I agree with others about the right arm - not enough to add to the image, too much to disappear . . .


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Sep 07, 2016 01:04 |  #5

Yeah, thank you guys. In the end i darkened that arm into abyss. :)

///low quality this one, but you get the idea :]

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Sep 28, 2016 13:06 |  #6

I like it. Just a bit underexposed and need to clone out the hair overlapping one of his fingers, but I like it.


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Sep 28, 2016 13:10 |  #7

Strange clothing bump own the right side of his V-neck?

Personally I'd like more contrast... it definitely is to underexposed for me.


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Sep 29, 2016 02:41 |  #8

I meant to make it underexposed. That worked way better for me this time :]


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