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Aug 29, 2016 14:46 |  #1

this picture in question. thoughts?

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Aug 30, 2016 02:55 |  #2

I like the picture, but I don't relate it to the title -- and I feel some barrel distortion.

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Aug 30, 2016 03:40 |  #3

I actually added the distortion...

The title means that i just dont know to keep this image or bin it :D

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Aug 31, 2016 07:26 |  #4

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I actually added the distortion...

it's uneven, left side is bulging too much, really screws it up. Is that a horseshoe that is hovering over her head? I'd ditch it.

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Sep 01, 2016 02:29 |  #5

I like it a lot. I like the distortion... it is almost as if the image is reaching towards me. In most images we want the subject to stand out but in this case it seems as if she is part of the whole and it works really well.

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Sep 01, 2016 11:35 |  #6

I like it a lot too. Shows a lot of forethought.




  
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Sep 01, 2016 14:11 |  #7

I like it a lot too.

The horseshoe most assuredly needs to stay. In fact, I might even get rid of the lines that appear to be, are, supporting it. So it does in fact look like it's hovering over her head. Adds a bit of an abstract quality.

Heck.....I just realized she's wearing a leotard. I thought she was nekked. Shows you where my mind is. :rolleyes:

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