Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
Thread started 06 Sep 2016 (Tuesday) 15:27
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

Sand Dollars

 
daystar
Senior Member
Avatar
589 posts
Likes: 520
Joined Aug 2008
Location: East Coast, US
     
Sep 06, 2016 15:27 |  #1

Playing with B&W conversion. Would appreciate any advice for improvment. Thank you.

IMAGE: https://c7.staticflickr.com/9/8159/29397362142_2ace706083_b.jpg

Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
flyfisher
Goldmember
Avatar
1,157 posts
Gallery: 1 photo
Likes: 108
Joined Nov 2004
Location: Ma, USA
     
Sep 07, 2016 12:06 |  #2

I think that it needs more contrast it looks a little flat try to bring out the shapes of the petals on the shells. The larger shell has something on the top left petal that could be removed.


Steve

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
joedlh
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
5,512 posts
Gallery: 52 photos
Likes: 684
Joined Dec 2007
Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea.
     
Sep 07, 2016 12:56 |  #3

The histogram says no, but the lighter parts on the left sides look clipped on my monitor. They lack detail.


Joe
Gear: Kodak Instamatic, Polaroid Swinger. Oh you meant gear now. :rolleyes:
http://photo.joedlh.ne​t (external link)
Editing ok

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
daystar
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
589 posts
Likes: 520
Joined Aug 2008
Location: East Coast, US
     
Sep 07, 2016 13:14 |  #4

flyfisher wrote in post #18120005 (external link)
I think that it needs more contrast it looks a little flat try to bring out the shapes of the petals on the shells. The larger shell has something on the top left petal that could be removed.

Ok, I'll try some more contrast. And yes, I did miss that "trash?" on the shell..I'll clone that out. :)


Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
daystar
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
589 posts
Likes: 520
Joined Aug 2008
Location: East Coast, US
     
Sep 07, 2016 13:14 |  #5

joedlh wrote in post #18120047 (external link)
The histogram says no, but the lighter parts on the left sides look clipped on my monitor. They lack detail.

I see what you're saying...I'll mess with it some more and try to get more detail.


Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Alveric
Goldmember
Avatar
4,598 posts
Gallery: 38 photos
Likes: 1061
Joined Jan 2011
Location: Canada
     
Sep 07, 2016 13:51 |  #6
bannedPermanent ban

Highlights look fine here. Just more contrast, says I.


'The success of the second-rate is deplorable in itself; but it is more deplorable in that it very often obscures the genuine masterpiece. If the crowd runs after the false, it must neglect the true.' —Arthur Machen
Why 'The Histogram' Sux (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
joedlh
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
5,512 posts
Gallery: 52 photos
Likes: 684
Joined Dec 2007
Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea.
     
Sep 07, 2016 18:06 |  #7

joedlh wrote in post #18120047 (external link)
The histogram says no, but the lighter parts on the left sides look clipped on my monitor. They lack detail.

A good monitor does make a difference. I wrote my earlier remark based on what I saw on my work computer. At home, I wouldn't have made the same observation.


Joe
Gear: Kodak Instamatic, Polaroid Swinger. Oh you meant gear now. :rolleyes:
http://photo.joedlh.ne​t (external link)
Editing ok

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
daystar
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
589 posts
Likes: 520
Joined Aug 2008
Location: East Coast, US
     
Sep 07, 2016 19:28 |  #8

Alveric wrote in post #18120071 (external link)
Highlights look fine here. Just more contrast, says I.

Ok...thank you! :)


Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
daystar
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
589 posts
Likes: 520
Joined Aug 2008
Location: East Coast, US
     
Sep 07, 2016 19:30 |  #9

joedlh wrote in post #18120293 (external link)
A good monitor does make a difference. I wrote my earlier remark based on what I saw on my work computer. At home, I wouldn't have made the same observation.

Oh, good to know. :)


Nikon D750 | Nikon D7100 | 85mm 1.8G | 50mm 1.8G | 35mm 1.8G | Tamron 70-200 2.8

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

2,521 views & 0 likes for this thread, 4 members have posted to it.
Sand Dollars
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member is ealarcon
518 guests, 139 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.