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Mar 12, 2006 13:35 |  #1

Please comment. Any critique will do. This is a great place to learn. Thanks to all who participate.


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Mar 12, 2006 21:24 |  #2

I like everything about the background except the screening - it is too sharp and distracting. If the screening were further back, there would be a possibility for gettting it out of focus. The subject is well posed, and I like te fact that the eyes are exquisite - very good coloration and detail. Her right eye only needs one catch light, so you could Photoshop out the second light (down in the corner).

The compostion is good, and the color balance seems to be good.


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Mar 13, 2006 09:27 as a reply to  @ Robert_Lay's post |  #3

Thanks once again, Bob. I just couldn't get Oreo to understand he had to come closer to me to blur the background better, and I must say he was more distracted by what was out there than we would be. He has no front claws, but always brings home a field mouse for us for dinner, and he is the lord over our 3 dogs. There are some more pix of "the session" here: http://www.basssick.co​m/images/oreo031206/ (external link). Thanks.


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Mar 15, 2006 03:28 |  #4

coach51 wrote:
Please comment. Any critique will do. This is a great place to learn. Thanks to all who participate.

A nice puss and good photo: you have done well with a difficult subject - a mainly black cat - and you have avoided burning out the white areas.




  
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Mar 15, 2006 05:57 as a reply to  @ colliewalker1's post |  #5

Very Nice - Stiking Eyes


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