Customer Shots for a Transport Company

(Edit: Would these have fitted better in "Fashion, Editorial & Commercial"?)

These are two customers to a transport company, that are going to use the images for their website (as "references").

My first of this kind of shot. He wanted the pictures to feel like "on location but with blurry background".
First one is a building site, the other one is at a company that rents out things to building sites etc.

All comments, critique etc is welcome!

I think for their intended application these look great. I can see these as part of a brochure.

saea501 wrote in post #18238690
I think for their intended application these look great. I can see these as part of a brochure.

Thank you!

Was a little bit nervous and had limited time with both of them.


Any thing I could have improved?


/Jocce

The only thing that strikes me as being "bad" is the high viz jacket intruding on the guys jaw line in number one. It just alters his face space enough to bug me but the shot does what it is intended to do.

wardie wrote in post #18239690
The only thing that strikes me as being "bad" is the high viz jacket intruding on the guys jaw line in number one. It just alters his face space enough to bug me but the shot does what it is intended to do.

Thank you for the feedback. This was a detail i didn't until I was at home editing the pictures.
Lucky for me, the customer liked the picture anyway


/Jocce