A couple studio model shots for C&C

Would appreciate C&C from some experts here if you have time. And kind of comments - Lighting, composition, poses, background, processing, anything.

I like your lighting and processing but she looks bored to tears. The item...for lack of a better word....that she's wearing in picture 2 isn't very flattering to her. It has no shape and as such, hides her shape.

saea501 wrote in post #18270337
I like your lighting and processing but she looks bored to tears. The item...for lack of a better word....that she's wearing in picture 2 isn't very flattering to her. It has no shape and as such, hides her shape.

Thank you!

You never want to point the shoulder into the camera lens like you did in 1. It almost looks like here knee.
You're also not suppose to have the model lock joints and make the should stick up/out like 2
It would be nice to see her smile in these shots too.
The light looks natural and that's a plus. I would have liked to see the model interact in 2 as well.

drdiesel1 wrote in post #18271978
You never want to point the shoulder into the camera lens like you did in 1. It almost looks like here knee.
You're also not suppose to have the model lock joints and make the should stick up/out like 2
It would be nice to see her smile in these shots too.
The light looks natural and that's a plus. I would have liked to see the model interact in 2 as well.

Thank you! Much appreciated.