Head Shot For A Bio In A City Magazine - C & C and Recommended LR Edits Requested

Disclaimer: This was shot really quickly in front of my house for a relative in the middle of a sunny south florida day, more or less SOOC other than maybe some saturation, slight clarity and reduced highlights. D810 and Nikon 85 1.8. I would have preferred a different location but time did not permit. This is the shot she chose out of the set. I don't like the line of green along the top, but think it's too close to the top of her head to crop off (though I will see how it looks tonight anyway). Any C + C, recommended LR edits, additional crops, etc. are requested. Thanks!

The first is a quick clone that could have been better done. The second attempts to minimize the bright-day squint using liquify.

Excellent! The eyes were the other area that concerned me a bit. Can't believe I didn't think of a clone instead of a crop.

Thank you for the insight and time you took. Definitely an improvement.