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Apr 10, 2017 04:50 |  #1

I have been working on this image a short while but sometimes you look too long at an image to see any imperfections/issues

Below is the final edit and the original (SOOC)

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Apr 10, 2017 22:36 |  #2

I like the slight crop off the bottom. The HDR/colors are overdone for my taste - I would target something in between SOOC and the final, but that is mostly a matter of taste. Maybe darkening the middle area of grass would be enough. It seems to pull my eye away from the boathouse which I think is the subject here. I do see a slight halo around the mountains. Nice composition, and nicely done for this style.


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Apr 11, 2017 04:39 |  #3

Beautifully done!

I would be tempted to dodge and burn the foreground, reduce the saturation just a little and adding a subtle vignette to finish off :)


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