Ok, no response in Critique Corner, so I'll post here.
These were shot last night during a practical in my Studio Portrait course. C&C please...
cyber_m0nkey Senior Member 701 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Singapore<--Sydney<--Odessa More info | Mar 15, 2006 22:02 | #1 |
cinci-photo Senior Member  569 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Cincinnati, OH More info | Mar 15, 2006 22:08 | #2 I think these are very nice shots. Very good lighting in #1 - I like the way you kept the reflection of the lights off her glasses. #2 could use a little more light on the face, but if this is what you were going for..... it works. I also love the rim light on the hair. Both 3 and 4 are also very good. Nice lighting overall and very good composition. Jamey
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CookieMonster Senior Member  344 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: DETROIT, U.S.A. More info | Mar 15, 2006 22:09 | #3 all the shots look really nice. beautiful model. #1,2, and 4 are nicely done. IMHO the 3rd one is a bit OOF plus if she smiled a bit more it would accent the photo nicer. My Website
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DanteKing "Cream of Corn" BurgerMeister  9,134 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Anselmo, California More info | Mar 15, 2006 22:10 | #4 very nice. #3 seems a bit dark. Dante
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taramcg Senior Member 322 posts Joined Feb 2006 Location: New Jersey More info | Mar 15, 2006 23:03 | #5 Nice lighting and your model has very captivating eyes that you captured well. I love the second one. The lighting and her expression/pose create a mysetrious mood. I like that. Tara
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incendy Goldmember  2,118 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Orange County More info | Mar 16, 2006 00:37 | #6 Oh, I love the model! Those eyes Canon 5d with 35mm 1.4L, 24-70mm 2.8L and 135mm 2.0L
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webejamn Goldmember  1,488 posts Likes: 8 Joined Jun 2005 Location: kalispell montana More info | they are all great, however something about #2 looks unnatural to me http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000188/
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Mar 16, 2006 01:30 | #8 All are quite good, but #1 is outstanding IMO. I don't care for the strong backlight in #2. But they are all very good. Nice work, pretty model. Dave
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GyRob Cream of the Crop 10,206 posts Likes: 1413 Joined Feb 2005 Location: N.E.LINCOLNSHIRE UK. More info | Mar 16, 2006 03:09 | #9 no response ! they are very good imho No1 is my fav out of the set.nice work. "The LensMaster Gimbal"
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MaureenSouza Ms. MODERATOR Something Spectacular!  More info | Mar 16, 2006 03:41 | #10 Verrrry nice. You've got a beautiful model there as well. Life is hard...but I just take it one photograph at a time.
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cyber_m0nkey THREAD STARTER Senior Member 701 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Singapore<--Sydney<--Odessa More info | Mar 16, 2006 03:47 | #11 Thanks for all the comments guys much appreciated. #2 is my personal favourite, and the darker, low-key effect was what I was after to highlight THOSE eyes, I might however bring up to brightness on her face just that little bot. This girl is actually the daughter of the guy that's conducting the course I'm doing.
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blundar Member  168 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Norwich, CT More info | Mar 16, 2006 07:44 | #12 The model is a real cutie. The poses are good, and the lighting is good. But because these are all a bit underexposed, these shots all need a bit more brightness, contrast, saturation, and sharpness adjustments with photoshop. I would also warm up the white balance a little more to give the photos a nicer skintone. Antonio Cotto
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Mills Goldmember  4,105 posts Joined Jul 2003 Location: Chicago, Illinois More info | I think you did a very good job. Well done. Mills
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snapshot9670 Member  115 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: San Francisco, California More info | 1 and 2 are my favs...great lighting on 2.... 3 and 4 look a little flat. Canon Rebel XT (Black)
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scorpiojo Senior Member 331 posts Joined Oct 2005 Location: Chicago, IL More info | Mar 16, 2006 12:22 | #15 I like # 3 best. The model has great eyes...
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