Thoughts here?
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May 11, 2017 05:51 | #2 Great shot, apart from that towel on the left.
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May 11, 2017 10:17 | #3 Wow, the more i look at it, the more i like the image. _______________
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philodelphi Goldmember More info | I'd probably crop the left and the right a bit since you have good framing there to crop to (the tiled walls). The story is the juxtaposition of the dog and the child, so all else is distracting to me. The liberties you took with the color make it a bit creepy, which I for one, generally like. Sony DSC-RX100M2 • α7R III / ILCE-7RM3 • Cyber-shot DSC-RX10 IV | Voigtlander 65mm F2 Macro APO-Lanthar | Venus Optics Laowa 15mm f/4 Macro | Sony FE 24-240mm F3.5-6.3 OSS • Sonnar T* FE 55mm F1.8 ZA • FE 24mm f/1.4 GM | Samyang 35mm f/1.4 ED AS UMC | Canon MP-E 65mm f/2.8 1-5x Macro Photo • EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro USM | Sigma 100-400mm f/5-6.3 DG OS HSM | Tokina Firin 20mm f/2 FE MF | Tamron 28-75mm F2.8 Di III RXD
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ejenner Goldmember More info Post edited over 6 years ago by ejenner. | May 12, 2017 22:26 | #5 Micro5797 wrote in post #18351886 Wow, the more i look at it, the more i like the image. I do like the tones, Agree, but I don't care for the tone. Personal preference. I see the reason for blue-ish, IDK. Edward Jenner
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May 17, 2017 01:19 | #6 Thanks all for your feedback. I'll play around with tones and crops... http://averymckenna.smugmug.com/
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May 17, 2017 01:24 | #7 Here's a little bit different shot Dogs http://averymckenna.smugmug.com/
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philodelphi Goldmember More info | I feel sad I can't see doggo's eyes. Sony DSC-RX100M2 • α7R III / ILCE-7RM3 • Cyber-shot DSC-RX10 IV | Voigtlander 65mm F2 Macro APO-Lanthar | Venus Optics Laowa 15mm f/4 Macro | Sony FE 24-240mm F3.5-6.3 OSS • Sonnar T* FE 55mm F1.8 ZA • FE 24mm f/1.4 GM | Samyang 35mm f/1.4 ED AS UMC | Canon MP-E 65mm f/2.8 1-5x Macro Photo • EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro USM | Sigma 100-400mm f/5-6.3 DG OS HSM | Tokina Firin 20mm f/2 FE MF | Tamron 28-75mm F2.8 Di III RXD
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kf095 Out buying Wheaties More info | May 17, 2017 13:14 | #9 Second is way better image overall and due to disappearance of huge logo in particular. M-E and ME blog
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PineBomb I have many notable flaws More info | May 17, 2017 14:12 | #10 The color cast, logo and towel are subjective cosmetic issues IMO, and don't interest me in the least. I think both images could have been improved by bumping ISO up in order to use a faster shutter speed. Between the two, I prefer the perspective and framing of the first image, and how that impacts the interrelation between the dog and the child. -Matt
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Jimconnerphoto Goldmember More info | May 19, 2017 12:52 | #11 I am also leaning toward the first image with a bit more cropped off the right. Wedding and Portraits www.jimconnerphoto.com
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May 19, 2017 17:29 | #12 kf095 wrote in post #18356945 Second is way better image overall and due to disappearance of huge logo in particular. ![]()
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May 23, 2017 12:37 | #13 Your logo will be no hindrance if someone whats the image. So easy to remove in PP. Sony a7R3a/a6300/ 16-70/4 / 70-200/4 G / 12-24/4 G/ 24-105/4 G /Sony HVL-60M
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shumicse Member 160 posts Likes: 16 Joined Aug 2013 More info | May 24, 2017 05:57 | #14 Ramon-uk wrote in post #18351738 Great shot, apart from that towel on the left. Definitely don't like the strange tone and lack of contrast, if it's a black dog then it should be black. I agree, that towel is distracting!
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DThriller Goldmember More info | Jun 04, 2017 15:29 | #15 The first edit is a bit instagramy but not obnotious. Its a cool shot so its ok. When the edit is trying to make up for a bad shot it bad http://www.facebook.com/DPhillipsStudios
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