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Jul 21, 2017 06:55 | #1 How can I make this better? Image hosted by forum (866397) © Nicole2320 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Nicole
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saea501 ... spilled over a little on the panties  More info | Jul 21, 2017 07:10 | #2 Probably just me but the mouth to mouth thing they have going on seems a little weird. Remember what the DorMouse said.....feed your head.
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Jul 21, 2017 10:06 | #3 Cute baby and nice candid-type capture. Maybe add a vignette, and I'd clone out the little flyaway atop mom's forehead. A slight boost in clarity would make it pop some more. Mom's are always kissing on their babies and babies love it! -- Image Editing OK --
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that.  24,910 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16339 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | Jul 21, 2017 10:32 | #4 Very nice. My only suggestion is maybe soften the grooves at the back of Mom's neck where holding her head back compresses the skin. saea501 wrote in post #18407484  Probably just me but the mouth to mouth thing they have going on seems a little weird. Not just you. It looks more like a couple's kiss than a parental kiss. PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | Comments welcome
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texkam "Just let me be a stupid photographer."  1,580 posts Likes: 998 Joined Mar 2012 Location: Olympia, Washington USA More info | Jul 21, 2017 10:57 | #5 Looks a little heavy on the magenta end.
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Jul 21, 2017 11:08 | #6 Thanks for the suggestion. He doesn't know how to put his lips together for a kiss. He kiss with his mouth open like he is going to bite you lol. Nicole
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Thanks at first i didn't see it but when i zoomed in i saw it. Nicole
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So smooth out her neck? Nicole
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I haven't completed any pp, so I should tone down the magenta? Nicole
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Jul 21, 2017 11:12 | #10 I'm working on lighting. Nicole
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that. 24,910 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16339 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | Jul 21, 2017 11:38 | #11 Nicole2320 wrote in post #18407635 So smooth out her neck? Right, just lighten those lines a little. PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | Comments welcome
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Thanks, I have the raw file, so that will make editing easier. Nicole
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suecassidy Goldmember  4,102 posts Likes: 37 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | Jul 22, 2017 11:20 | #13 I like the IDEA of the mom and baby kiss/interaction but the execution didn't work out so well because it looks like Mom is trying to slip him the tongue. Ew. Perhaps if you made it black and white the tongue might not be so obvious? Sue Cassidy
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Jul 22, 2017 18:20 | #14 suecassidy wrote in post #18408469 I like the IDEA of the mom and baby kiss/interaction but the execution didn't work out so well because it looks like Mom is trying to slip him the tongue. Ew. Perhaps if you made it black and white the tongue might not be so obvious? You're not familiar with lip anatomy. There's no tongue in the picture. This mom has full lips -- that's all. -- Image Editing OK --
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Correct there is no tongue Nicole
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Thanks Qbx. I will try BW to see what that looks like Sue.