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Early Sprouters, what do you think (newbie)

 
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Mar 17, 2006 11:22 |  #1

I noticed a little color in the flower beds of our new home and so I whipped out the camera and started snapping. Keeping in mind that I'm new at this, what do you think? Any advice?
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Mar 17, 2006 11:24 |  #2

one more...
It's kind of sad I had to scale down from 1.2 MB to 66 KB, oh well. heheh


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Mar 17, 2006 11:43 |  #3

The first two shots are great!
#1 seems to be properly focused, good exposure, although it could be lightened a bit. The color balance seems to be OK. Composition is OK but could be improved upon.
I would crop out some of the out-of-focus foreground. By playing around a bit with the vantage point and perspective, you could have arranged for the composition to be a bit more interesting and traditional . For example, make the verticals vertical and the horizontal lines horizontal. Arrange for lines to cross at the magic 1/3 points(Divide your space into 9 equal sized rectangles and take advantage of those 4 points where lines cross).

In #2 you can throw out the rules of thirds and concentrate on what should and shouldn't be in the frame. Things that are only half in and half out can be problems. They can contribute by framing the main subject or they can be a distraction. Think about it yourself! Usually it takes a lot of jockeying around to make your subject stand out, keep it isolated from distractions and try to get some compositional tricks in as well.
#2 also has good exposure and color balance.

That last one, #3 - throw it out!

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Mar 17, 2006 17:38 |  #4

The buildings and fences in all the shots just really lose it for me. Tough to figure out what the subject is in any of the shots. If the subject is the flower, then get in close and get rid of any distractions in the background.

For example, you would not know that these flowers are less than 1 foot away from the foundation of my house:

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