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Sultry image Ken. I love how she looks like “you wouldn’t dare bring her home an open pay packet” in a very sensuous way. Talented lady, good photographer

Great Photo and a stunning model!!

I would have given more space between the top of the frame and the top of her head.

Pitter wrote in post #18658809
I would have given more space between the top of the frame and the top of her head.

Why?

Pitter wrote in post #18658809
I would have given more space between the top of the frame and the top of her head.

kermit4u wrote in post #18663207
Why?

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Having the top of her head so close to the top of the frame creates visual tension, and that tension is incongruous with the overall mood and feel of the image.

Because it is so tight at the top, my eye goes right to that area where her head meets the edge of the frame, and I think about / look for stray hairs, and wonder if they are actually cut off by the image's boundaries, or not. . I don't think that the creator of the image wants people to be looking for or thinking about stray hairs - that usually wouldn't be the intended response from someone creating an image such as this one.

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It would make for a better composition. As it is her head is crowding the top of the frame in an awkward manner. I would either give more space as I said or cut off a bit of the top of her head for a more "intimate" composition.