icor1031 wrote in post #18566474
Anyway, what advice should I add to this, for my models/clients?
You forgot to tell clients who wish to be photographed with their pets that Little Sweetie should be shampooed and brushed before–
Wait. Add advice? No, I think you should remove some. Women don't need or want to be told what body parts to shave, especially by a male stranger. Trust me on this one. About makeup, I don't know what fashion prevails in Rapid City, but many girls and women where I live (it's a casual area) wear their natural faces and are unlikely to own face powder. Skin indentations from undergarments won't matter if a client will be fully dressed. Anyway, how is a woman who always wears a bra in public supposed to travel to your session without one? And won't your cautions about strap marks worry women who expect tame, nonglamour shoots? They might wonder just what kind of portraits you usually do and whether you're going to try to talk them into taking off clothes once they get there.
Most people don't have conspicuous dandruff. Instead of implying that the reader probably does, I'd leave the dandruff discussion for those who arrive needing it. Then deal with it in person.
Offensive props, gang insignia? Is it really necessary to mention them? Perhaps your clients often show up brandishing sex toys and wearing T shirts with racist slogans, I don't know. Again, I'm unfamiliar with the local Rapid City culture.
"Earring" is one word (spellcheck won't flag that kind of thing for you). I also noticed at least one typo somewhere.