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Mar 22, 2018 17:13 |  #1

Wanted to get some feedback on my latest work.. please ignore the watermarks..

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Mar 22, 2018 17:24 |  #2

They're all wonderful. Raise your prices.

The only thing I might quarrel with is in #2. There's possibly too much light below the sitter's waist. It makes her hand compete for attention with her face.


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Mar 23, 2018 00:32 |  #3

Angela, very nice.




  
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Mar 23, 2018 06:41 |  #4

Nice shots! I am loving how moody the first one is!




  
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Mar 23, 2018 19:40 |  #5

OhLook wrote in post #18591859 (external link)
They're all wonderful. Raise your prices.

The only thing I might quarrel with is in #2. There's possibly too much light below the sitter's waist. It makes her hand compete for attention with her face.

Thank you. I'll play around with the hands.


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