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Jul 13, 2018 03:34 |  #1

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Jul 13, 2018 08:55 |  #2

I really enjoy these. Let's see more



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Jul 14, 2018 10:00 |  #3

Nice, I think I would have cloned out the birds in both of them and possibly a bit of the white rubbish floating on the water in the second one.




  
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Jul 14, 2018 13:21 |  #4

1. Altho I don't much like B&W fotografy (which makes me visually handicapped), I like these.
2. I LOVE the lines and texture of the bridge in the first. If I had access to that scene, I'd concentrate on the bridge AND concentrate on the buildings behind, but not both in one pic.
3. The different textures of the big wall in the 2nd are very interesting and I like that pic, but I too would have cloned out some of the trash in the water.

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Jul 14, 2018 21:56 |  #5

Can't tell ya, they are not fitting on my screen. From what I was able to see - exposure is OK, but something feels overprocessed.


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Jul 16, 2018 17:08 |  #6

I think the corner vignetting is too heavy in both shots; otherwise nicely done.


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Jul 17, 2018 19:47 |  #7

So just a couple of things to thing about. In images like your first one, the converging lines are usually used to being your attention to somewhere.... the subject.... or something. In this case, you eye is led down the bridge, but what it hits first is the handrails. Is that the subject? Or the buildings behind? Not a bad image by any means, but as you do these types of image just think about where you are leading the viewers eye to. In this case, the differing shapes and patterns in themselves are interesting. So a good image.... but just keep that in mind.

Second image suffers from wide-angle-ites. The lines on the left lean right, the lines on the right lean left. You can fix that in photoshop or lightroom, and when you clean that up it "cleans" the image up significantly.... more than you would expect. Again the textures are great. The leading perspective is fine too. But the eye doesn't see things normally like that - lines are perpendicular - so having that create some subliminal distraction.

I know that it may be hard to believe but parallel lines issue causes more distraction than the floating trash. I actually have no issues with that trash.... it lends to the "decay" narrative. But that is just my opinion.




  
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