I was walking across the street and saw this. Had just the basics with me, but I still thought this one turned out decent. Any C&C that might help me learn and grow appreciated.
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shavri Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Mar 22, 2006 07:02 | #1 I was walking across the street and saw this. Had just the basics with me, but I still thought this one turned out decent. Any C&C that might help me learn and grow appreciated. Editing is good, but explaining your edits is AWESOME!! Please tell me how you did any edits.
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shavri THREAD STARTER Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Mar 22, 2006 07:04 | #2 |
ajbalazic Cream of the Crop 5,228 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: Kitchener, ON, Canada More info | Mar 22, 2006 09:44 | #3 Good one. The shot is nice, but nothing out of the ordinary - I think because of the harsh sunlight. Alan
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shavri THREAD STARTER Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Thanks, Any suggestions for next time? Either technical or composition? Editing is good, but explaining your edits is AWESOME!! Please tell me how you did any edits.
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ajbalazic Cream of the Crop 5,228 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: Kitchener, ON, Canada More info | Mar 22, 2006 11:37 | #5 I this case, Including the entire captial building (because you've just barely cut the top off). Maybe an off-center composition- perhaps standing behind the left wheel of the right side police car and using portrait framing to emphasize the height of the building and depth of the shot. Just some ideas. Alan
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shavri THREAD STARTER Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Thank you, I will keep those in mind. Editing is good, but explaining your edits is AWESOME!! Please tell me how you did any edits.
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kbyrd8455 Senior Member 419 posts Joined Feb 2006 Location: New York More info | Mar 22, 2006 19:56 | #7 I think it would be better if the building was more in focus. It looks more like the street is sharper and the top of the building wasnt cropped off. I like the line that the police cars make. Canon Rebel XT kit lens, Canon 50mm 1.8 lens, Canon 24mm-70mm L (The Brick), Canon 28mm-135mm IS, Canon 75mm-300 , Sigma 28mm 200mm,
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shavri THREAD STARTER Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Thanks, you and ajbalazic have both been very helpful, will try to keep your ideas in mind for next set of shots. Editing is good, but explaining your edits is AWESOME!! Please tell me how you did any edits.
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BottomBracket Cream of the Crop 6,398 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2004 Location: NYC More info | Mar 25, 2006 12:35 | #9 Lol, very nice concept. The picture seems a bit soft, what camera did you use? I agree with the previous comments, and would like to add that you might want to take the picture from a worm's eye view, with a wide angle. This will emphasize one of the cars in the foreground, as well as the building, which hopefully will be all in the frame. Also, I would wait for a day when there are interesting cloud formations which would make the shot more dramatic. Pio
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shavri THREAD STARTER Senior Member 537 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Seattle, Washington More info | Mar 25, 2006 19:06 | #10 Hmm, I think it was a special occurance at the capitol that had all the cops there. Might be hard to convince them to show up when the clouds are just right... still I might threaten to shoot a senator?.... nah, not worth it. Maybe I can figure out how to get some clouds in PSCS2?? Editing is good, but explaining your edits is AWESOME!! Please tell me how you did any edits.
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Transportithere Goldmember 1,092 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Puget Sound, U.S.A. More info | That has got to be the foggest place in the world. POTN is a wonderful source of information.
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stoneylonesome Barn Stormer 10,460 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2003 Location: Connecticut, USA More info | Nice shot, where they handing out free donuts, that why there are so many cop cars. the name is Winston but they call me Sandy
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am_pitbull_terrier Goldmember 1,383 posts Joined Feb 2005 Location: Pittsburgh, P.A. More info | stoneylonesome wrote: Nice shot, where they handing out free donuts, that why there are so many cop cars. ![]()
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roman_t Cream of the Crop 5,271 posts Likes: 4 Joined Mar 2005 Location: Astana, Kazakhstan More info | Mar 26, 2006 16:49 | #14 i saw alot of american films - they celebrate or say last words to one of them.
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