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Feb 17, 2020 01:09 |  #1

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Feb 17, 2020 05:18 |  #2

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Feb 17, 2020 22:48 |  #3

Is that a bird on the rock?

Personally I would prefer to have a bit more sky, even though there isn't much going on in it.

I like the composition a lot. Looks like you thought that one out.


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Feb 17, 2020 23:19 |  #4

Thanks guys. I'm struggling with post processing skills a lot. How do I get rid of the effect around the rocks? These were two separate exposures, one after the other. I'm wondering if the "correct lens effects" in Lightroom may have screwed it up here? Or if this was just bad CA that wasn't removed well?

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Feb 18, 2020 20:54 as a reply to  @ ShootTwice's post |  #5

Looks like a bad merge to me with some CA. If you choose to bracket, I think 3 is the minimum you should go with.


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Feb 19, 2020 23:20 |  #6

Sometimes you can help it with good CA correction and blending parameters.

However, even doing the best I can, sometimes I have to go around the edge with the clone tool and tidy it up. This can take a bit of practice to make it look completely natural.

Looking at that edge, this could be one of those situations. In fact, given the amount of rock and the contrast, I wouldn't have tried to get to too exact in the first place, pretty much knowing that some touch up was going to be needed.


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Feb 24, 2020 13:05 |  #7

Check this out on removing the halo/CA

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