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Mar 25, 2006 22:01 |  #1

:rolleyes: Any comments would help, Thanks.


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Mar 25, 2006 22:10 |  #3

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Mar 25, 2006 22:36 |  #4

Wow! The man is totally transformed by his smile in number 4 (compared to 3)! I like all of them, but #4 is my favorite!

<edit> Sorry, I meant #6, not #4!


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Mar 26, 2006 09:12 |  #5

nice shots, I like number 4 the best as well.


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Mar 26, 2006 15:29 |  #6

I personally like 6. Four could probably use a bit of Fill. Not sure about the B & W...the skin tones just look too brown to me. Maybe just me.....see what others say.

Good composition though.

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Mar 26, 2006 18:23 |  #7

Thanks for the comments, they are so helpful in deciding portfolio shots :)


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Mar 27, 2006 00:18 |  #8

no 1, 4 and 6. gorgeous couple! wish i could have seen full feet in shots-but that's just my opinion




  
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Mar 27, 2006 08:11 |  #9

In the first image it would have been better had she tossed all of her hair behind her right shoulder and placed her hands around his neck. The horizon is tilted. # 2. Leaning them to camera left would have given this image some action. As it is it is static. Her necklace is crooked. # 3. Two too many hands. The rule in portraiture is to try and not show any more hands than what is need to tell the story and look good. In this image her right and his left should be the only ones showing. I ALWAYS place the back hand in the small of the back so it will be hidden. I don't like little 'sausages' growing out of shoulders or waists. # 4 has 'raccoon eyes' and the heads are tipped away from each other, instead of toward one another. Tipping heads away from one another indicates a lack of closeness. # 6, I love the pose for the most part, but again there are too many hands and her knees are side by side. In portraiture nothing should be exactly side by side if at all possible.

Beautiful location and a great looking couple. Keep it up!

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Mar 27, 2006 08:51 |  #10

"I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach."


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