icor1031 wrote in post #19088031
I've been trying new things, e.g. I learned how to use a 35mm lens and get good shots with it, but I'm not really improving as a photographer. My 35mm shots aren't better than the shots I get with what I normally use (85mm); they're just different.
In other words, my images aren't really getting closer to inducing a "wow" from viewers. I feel stuck. This is my port:
https://www.instagram.com/idealportraits/
What should I do now? I don't know how to actually
improve.
Hi icor!
I looked at your IG page and your website. I admire your work! You have some great work.
I'm an amateur photographer, so take anything I say accordingly.
I will also be making a few comments on photos, not full-on critiques, but illustrative comments. You want to know how to improve; that takes knowing where you are, and where you are is represented by your photos.
You're a professional portrait photographer. Your clients want something that matches your work. You're a traditionalist, and yet I see variety in lighting, poses, et al. On your website, you have a lot of self-trust (guts, chutzpah) to show the bottom right hand portrait of the female (?) in the plaid shirt and the black hat. You can't see her face, but she knows it's her, and I suspect her family and friends do, too. It's a great shot! That's probably pushing the bounds of your clientele. Yet I think you can create a package that takes ideas further.
Look online for photo ideas. Go to your search engine of choice and search for portraits. See what's there. What looks interesting to you? What would you like to do? Understand that when I look at your work I see some really good things, traditional as well as different. If you see something different and it resonates with you, see if it's something you can use; otherwise, move on.
Look online for project ideas. Search for portrait projects. Maybe you'll find nothing, but you definitely won't find anything unless you look. You're not looking to recreate someone else's image, but you are looking for ideas for poses, lighting, settings, and whatever else you can find.
Look at fashion work. Here you're likely to find more avant garde work, but perhaps there will be something that looks good to you!
Look at art, paintings. With Covid-19, more museums and art galleries have work online. Art has been around for a lot longer than photography, so go to the richest sources you can find. Do NOT dismiss any artist. The painting is from Picasso. It's during one of his less abstract periods.
Finally I've added a family portrait I did in January of this year. This was actually done with a tilt-shift lens, and the post processing is updated from what I'd originally posted. Mom's and Dad's class rings are on the outside with our baby's ring (adult now of course) in the middle. While this isn't something you'd probably give as the *only* family portrait, it's a twist on what a portrait is.
You have some great and admirable work! It's "traditional" and it's creative. Just look once in awhile to see what others are doing today. Hope this helps!

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