Giving my 2 cents,
You're mostly there, the composition could use some tweaking but you got the general idea.
Your job essentially is to catalog the space, so ideally you want to get the whole room in 1 shot. There's 3 compositions you have to master, and they're the same compositions that an architect or an artist would use to sketch . The 1 point composition, 2 point composition and 3 point composition. Your straight on house shot is a 1 point, and all the rest you used 2 point perspective.
First critique: You have ALOT of things that are right up immediately against the edges around your images, curtains, picture frames, window frames, shelves.. it's unsettling. In design you always want to leave space around things so they don't feel cramped and crowded. Notice how the 2 images I attached has no parallel lines immediately against the edges (the left wall on the first photo has just enough information showing for your eyes to anchor yourself in the room, *it's obvious now you're standing there with your left shoulder to that wall). If the edge of your image must cut through something, you should try to cut it in a way so that peoples heads automatically fill in what's left out. (see the couches below)
You're also creating advertising images to market the house, fireplaces and the awesome windows will come with the house when its sold, the couches doesn't, and it's blocking the flow between spaces, might be wise to rearrange them a little to open up the flow between areas. those red chair and that sectional looks ugly to begin with and they're positioned in a way that it's prohibiting you from seeing the entire room with your camera. On your 4th and 5th shot I would've just cleared the room (maybe not the piano). On the 4th shot the sectional and the dog is blocking your view into the family area, and on the 5th shot I would've pulled back the sectional enough so the entire fireplace is visible. I can see someone might've put it there to "stage" the room a bit but in this case it's working against the goal. Less is more when it comes to having things in a room, the potential buyer is looking at the floors, moldings, countertops, details on those stairs, paneling on the walls... etc. Show them those things.
On the stairs shot I would've centered myself with the treats sign on that table and shot it straight on (in 1 point perspective), or take 1 step to your right, turn the camera to the left a little to show other room's relation to the stairs.
When shooting bathrooms, the less toilet the better. (unless they have one of those $10k Toto washlet toilets)
Overall you're on the right track, you might need to scoot your tripod a few inches or rotate your lens a few degrees but that's all. There's more than plenty of online resources out there (honestly just get a good understanding of what 1, 2 and 3 point perspectives are and know how to use a camera and that's all there is to it). go pick up a few magazines or browse the listings of a broker in your area that has the kind of photos you want to create, and pay attention to how the photos are composed, just copy their angles.
Edit: sorry if that came off a little too critical, best intentions.

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