first of all, thanks for posting. Taking a chance.
Its a really busy image. I am not sure yet what I think. If it were in a gallery, would it be an image I stop and look at? Maybe. Problem is, something with so much going on, I would rather have a much larger version. Not a critique of the image, but how it is presented. Not much you can do about it here though.
I would have to take more time with it to fully give you a critique. First impression though is I don't know what I am supposed to look at. The shapes are interesting. But then Im lost. Not sure what I am supposed to be seeing. That is where I am stuck. So I hope to come back at give you a second look. Hope that holds you over.....