While I agree here, be careful about attributing the field marks used for specific birds to all birds of the species. It is not always the case that males will have a dark spot (note the link actually says Pa's got a pure white head), and the corner of the mouth bit is frequently difficult to 'diagnose' in the field as the direction they are facing can easily mess with the perspective on that. Even the research experts (David Hancock, rehabbers at O.W.L, etc) have a fair bit of difficulty without being able to actually examine a bird or seeing them together in the wild.
Regarding the OP; a couple of other tips I would throw out there:
- The eye is most important. If you don't have solid "eye contact" (the viewer cannot clearly see at least one of the eyes), it hurts the image most of the time.
- Try to have your subject off-center in the frame; whether you're lucky enough to be able to frame it that way or by some creative cropping in post. Look up "rule of thirds" for one, more info on one basic technique around this.
- Try to include action/display of unique behaviors, markings, environments around your subject for added "punch" to your content when you can.
- Especially with high res sensors nowdays, make use of cropping to get rid of some less relevant and frequently distracting elements of the image.
Here's a *super* rough pass I did on your original shot to illustrate a couple of those points as related to it. Feel free to let me know if you prefer to have the edit removed. You have a decent starting shot there, aside from the severe underexposure. This was some cropping for composition, boost exposure, light tweaking of the tone curve to help the head stand out from the b/g and some heavy-handed sharpening just to illustrate. The results should be much easier to make look nice on the original image data.
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