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Mar 29, 2006 20:00 |  #1

Second post in this forum. My granddaughter - so I'm prejudice. Would like some outsider opinions. Was playing with my lighting but only had a few minutes to setup.

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Temperate might be a little cool and there's a little too much room at the top of the frame. Probably would have been better if her eyes were paralell to the frame not at an angle.


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Mar 29, 2006 22:25 |  #3

Agree with Hellashot:
Little cool (shadow light is), espically the white clothes.
Top of head is a little low.
I disagree eye angle - I love the angle the head.

From my position (Just starting Scott Kelby's book) you are advanced with PS type enhancements. You have given it an over all "large neg quality" look which is very good. The only comment about that is about the eye white - there is something different about them.
I love the lighting and Im not sure if the cheek color is PS or natural, but it all works very well. Your sharpening on the hair is excellent.

Now with all of that said the sum total of all of this is one priceless image of an adorable little girl. The general "impact" of the image is a hugh success which is made stonger with small cropping from the top. I bet mom just loves the image and its really easy to see why.

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Mar 30, 2006 15:45 as a reply to  @ Hellashot's post |  #4

Hellashot wrote:
Temperate might be a little cool and there's a little too much room at the top of the frame. Probably would have been better if her eyes were paralell to the frame not at an angle.

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Mar 30, 2006 15:48 as a reply to  @ llaamaboy's post |  #5

llaamaboy wrote:
Agree with Hellashot:
Little cool (shadow light is), espically the white clothes.
Top of head is a little low.
I disagree eye angle - I love the angle the head.

From my position (Just starting Scott Kelby's book) you are advanced with PS type enhancements. You have given it an over all "large neg quality" look which is very good. The only comment about that is about the eye white - there is something different about them.
I love the lighting and Im not sure if the cheek color is PS or natural, but it all works very well. Your sharpening on the hair is excellent.

Now with all of that said the sum total of all of this is one priceless image of an adorable little girl. The general "impact" of the image is a hugh success which is made stonger with small cropping from the top. I bet mom just loves the image and its really easy to see why.

Excellent

Thanks for taking the time. I appreciate it. BTW, didn't do anything to her cheek color. Very little levels, some USM, and minor blemish removal on her upper lip. Maybe a little contrast too.


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Mar 30, 2006 16:04 |  #6

great pose, she has such a genuine expression. i agree its a little cool, but i think it looks pretty good regardless.




  
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Mar 30, 2006 16:06 |  #7

I think this is a great shot. Although a little cool the exposure seems nice and even. Nice work!


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Mar 30, 2006 20:04 |  #8

Hey thanks everyone. I'm a little perplexed on the cool comments. Do you mean the color temperature is too cool on the Kelvin scale? It looks great on my Mac and even warmer on my PC at work. In other words the whites apear white versus blue. Are we talking the same thing?


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Mar 30, 2006 20:07 as a reply to  @ Bad Iron's post |  #9

Great shot! What lighting setup were you using?


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Mar 30, 2006 20:22 as a reply to  @ TooManyHobbies's post |  #10

Jeff_M_Miller wrote:
Great shot! What lighting setup were you using?

I was trying something new. I shot the main light through a diffuser panel with the strobe close to the diffuser so it would be on the harsh side. Had a fill light which really didn't do a lot so it must be a pretty high ratio. I only get a couple shots off before she gets bored. But I'm interested if it looks "cool" to you because I'm not seeing it.

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Mar 30, 2006 20:26 as a reply to  @ Bad Iron's post |  #11

The shot looks great and cool lighting works in this photo. It gives it an innocence and freshness feel. I don't think warm lighting would have looked as good with the white shirt and her skin tones.

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Mar 30, 2006 21:18 |  #12

I think it's a nice shot, but you might want to try it in black and white to add a little more emotion. Just a suggestion but I like it a lot.


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