Becca's first shoot

This is our first attempt at trying to get some risque type shots for Becca. I am afraid we failed. We were trying to get more of a glamour, sexy type photo. I do not have a studio, and it is hard to find somewhere to shoot nude or semi nude outdoors. How do you go about finding a place that it is safe to do this? What kind of advice can you give me on the following photos? Any and all critques appreciated.

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Well done.

Nicely posed and executed.

The first shot isn't very flattering. Kind of a "beached whale" pose.

I like the 1st shot. The brightness of the window is distracting in the second although the pose is very nice.

Cemeteries and state parks

And if the cops come and start to hassle you just tell them that you belong to the occult and they are interrupting your ceremony. Chances are you may freak them out and they'll leave, if they do split quick before they think about it and come back, lol. JK.

I like the first one(looks as if she's having more fun) more than the second myself, also I'd lose the stray strands of hair in the second in photoshop.

All in all, I like'em.

I actually live in a very rural area, my problem is not so much in finding a private place, but in making it look natural to be nude or semi-nude in the outdoors. Yes, I could take some topless bathing suit photo's by a creek somewhere, but other than those, how do you make it look natural.

To me the first one looks as if the shirt is in focus but the eyes are not. Am I the only one that noticed this?